Recently, there was a big accident. As everybody knows, Sewol ferry had sunk. For the result, about 269people had died and still 35people are missing. Now the whole country and the nation is crying for the victims of Sewol ferry accident, especially the high school students of Danwon high school. Also, because of this accident, the government is eliminating school field trips for these reasons below.
First, there had been a lot of accidents of bus, train, and ships(ferry).This accident of Sewol ferry was not the only one. Last friday, there was a big subway collision. Also, there were about 3400 bus accidents while going on field trips. Sewol ferry accident just taught us once again about how dangerous school field trips are.
Second, the whole country is crying for the victims and the family of the victims of the Sewol ferry accident. Lets say we got to a field trip safely. However, can you laugh and play while in other places the whole country is crying, and having a funeral? This is not the time for playing and laughing. We should feel reverence for the victims of the accident.
Lastly, not only about this Sewol ferry accident, school field trips are the main reason of school bullying.
School bullying mostly starts at school field trips. You sleep together and spend most of the time together with your friends. In those time, you find out your friend's weak points and defects and that becomes the very first step of school bullying.
For these reasons, for several years, school field trips will be eliminated
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